This is a blog where the students of Mr. La Marr's 4th Grade Rapid Learner Class will post their ideas about interesting topics within our classroom. The writings will, hopefully, give a reader the opportunity for thought as the students generate insightful ideas!
Happy summertime 5th graders! So, what is everyone doing? On the last day of school, you said you'd like a place to come in and tell us all what you are up to. Here you go: let us know what you are doing throughout the summer and keep in touch. I hope you all have some fun times to share with us. I know a lot of you are going away on trips; I know of two people who have already left and summer just started! Anyway, let us know what you are up to over the course of summer. I hope to hear from you all.
Hey 5th graders, if you have photos of your summer adventures that you want to show to the class, send them to me and I will post them for you!
Dylan on Osterbrogade Street-remember Number the Stars?
Photos from Dylan's adventures!
Captions by Dylan
Big chair in Squaw Valley
Hard swinging logs from my first blog
Easier swinging logs
Morning doves in my backyard
Apple summer camp certificate
From Mr. La Marr:
The redwoods way up north are so much taller than at Armstrong Redwoods. These are at Jedediah Smith Redwoods State Park.
How's that for a goosepen I saw at Humboldt Redwoods State Park?
We started the school year by making newspaper tables! We've conducted numerous science activities, and we taught the community some amazing science in Science Night, 2018. We have taken part in fun and thought provoking literature discussions. The Heroes of California visited our classroom as well as the author of our first book, Marci Seither. We played a gold rush game, and we are building websites to share our knowledge with the world. We won Science Olympiad, and many of you contributed mightily to Del Paso Manor's second consecutive win. And then, there are the trips! We have been underground, twice! California Caverns started our field trips, and what a way to start! We spent a day hiking in the footsteps of the gold miners who launched the biggest migration of people, ever. We hiked all over Old Sacramento and heard some strange stories our our city's past. We got to spend time with internees from the Japanese Internment camps. We went to the Exploratorium in San Francisco and to ExploratoRio just a few minutes a way. Of course, we got to spend a week living in a redwood forest and venturing into the tide pools. We've spent time with Pearley Monroe, Jack and Praiseworthy, Annemarie and Ellen and Yuki. We got to see many of Gary Paulsen's mistakes as he trained for the Iditarod, and we have gotten to follow Milo along on his adventures in the Lands Beyond. Of course, we cannot forget the lovely Mrs. Barnsworth or Emi's grandmother, Mrs. Kurihara . . . Along the way, we made good friends into better friends, we laughed, and we enjoyed our time together.
There is so much more but the question is this: if you could redo just one day of fourth grade, which day would it be? Tell the reader the day you'd redo and explain to us all why that is the day you would do over again, if you could. The more reasons you can give, the better we will understand why you chose that day.
Use good spelling and conventions, be clear and comment on each other's posts. This is the final blog of the year-let's make it the best!
We just completed an amazing week of environmental education at Westminster Woods. We hiked at day and at night, we went to the tide pools, we saw the tallest trees in the world, we took part in a campfire, we hiked before breakfast, we played on the cargo net, in the gaga pit, on the playground, and we had incredible fun hanging out with our friends. This blog is your opportunity to tell the world what you thought about your trip. As a writer, tell your reader what you enjoyed and tell us why you liked those things. Pick as many topics as you wish about which to write, but be sure you explain WHY you enjoyed those things. You need to avoid just telling what you did on this trip. The task is to explain why you liked, or didn't like, certain parts of your experience. You needn't write about everything, just the highlights. Think about how you will arrange your ideas. For each paragraph, be sure that you have a topic sentence. We all know the word not to use in the topic sentence, right? As always, be sure your spelling and conventions are strong. Check that sentence structure, and be sure that you are communicating with precision and accuracy. Have fun with this and let's see how many comments we can get! Be sure to check out each other's writings, and let's inform the world about our incredible week at Westminster Woods.
We loved By the Great Horn Spoon! by Sid Fleischman. However, the book just seems to need "the next part." By popular demand, and the chants of the 4th graders, the next part will be written!
In this post, your job is to tell "the next part." After the happy ending at the long wharf, what would happen to our characters if the story continued? Give it some thought, write what you think would happen, or what you'd like to see happen, and post it here. Be sure that the events you write fit in the scope of the story and would continue right where chapter 18 ends.
Be sure you have strong sentences, good spelling and correct conventions. We are all looking forward to seeing what each 4th grader will add to our recently completed literature study. HAVE FUN with this one, fourth graders!
We have read about the Barnsworth family in The Adventures of Pearley Monroe. Consider all the information we have read and discussed with respect to Elizabeth Barnsworth. Think of when she first arrived in Coloma all the way to when she departed and everything in between!
What is your opinion of this character? Create a piece of writing that fully details your ideas about her. Give a strong topic sentence, use precise details as proof of your topic sentence, and finish with a powerful conclusion sentence.
Be sure you edit and revise your writing so that it is as good as you can make it. Be sure the grammar and spelling are strong. Remember, our blog is read all over the world, so let's teach the world about Mrs. Barnsworth!
You may also comment on the writing that your classmates create. You may ask them questions, disagree (as long as you state your reason), or give a compliment about what they have written. It's always fun when people leave a thought about the work we do.
"I never knew words could be so confusing," Milo said to Tock as he bent down to scratch the dog's ear.
"Only when you use a lot to say a little," answered Tock.
Milo thought this was quite the wisest thing he'd heard all day.
-Norton Juster in The Phantom Tollbooth
In this, the final blog of the year, you get to tell the world anything you want about fourth grade. We have done a lot this year: we've spent a week in the woods, we've been underground twice, we visited the site of the gold discovery that kicked off the world's biggest voluntary migration of people, and we've visited internees from the Japanese Internment Camps. We've read awesome literature, had amazing discussions about the books, and we got to visit with the author of our first book. We've played a couple of games where we learned about mathematical problem solving and the California Gold Rush. We've created media for the world to learn from us, and we've entertained the community with incredible hands-on science. You have also created some incredible structures with Keva planks and K'Nex. We've also laughed a lot along the way. Those events are just a handful of the highlights of this school year.
You get to pick anything about fourth grade that you wish to tell a reader, except for the California Gold Rush. That topic has been amply covered. The challenge, though, is to follow the message in Tock's advice to Milo: you only get a few words to say a lot; Faintly Macabre comes to mind here, too. You have FIVE sentences to tell your reader about your chosen topic. The power of your sentences needs to be strong in order to fully tell your reader what you want to say. Choose wisely!